Looking Through the Looking Glass

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Open Poetry #10

Looking Through the Looking Glass

BirdeeB
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 106
USA

0 posted 2000-10-08 01:33 AM

Looking through the looking glasses,
I take in all around me.
Spaces in between memories.
Gaps in between loneliness,
Pacing back and forth.
I forgive my future and,
forget my past.
I glance into the looking
glass.
Happy to be where I am
Uspet of where I'll go.
Proud of what I'll be
with out you here.
I look through the
looking glass.
"Dear Dad,"
I write.
Oblivious to my
happines.
I have succeeded.
I look through
the looking glass once more
disregard the attempts.
I am me and you are me.

"So don't judge me by my failures, only by my dreams" SR71

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-10-08 08:19 AM

Looks like you are placing you emphasis where it belongs. Nice write and I am glad I caught it.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2000-10-08 08:54 AM

I'm glad that I read this one, it reminds on something either, that I want to forget.
thanks for sharing it.

Charisma

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