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For My Brother
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For My Brother |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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~~ This is from my heart to you, my Brother....you know who you are ~~ < !signature--> You were there today, and you heard me say I could use a helping hand... You held onto me in the stormy sea, helped me swim back to dry land... I was sinking fast in an ocean’s vast foamy whirlpool of my tears... But along you came, calling out my name, drowning out my useless fears......  I was all alone, sitting here at home, kindof scared and kindof sad... Wishing for someone I could just lean on, ‘til things didn’t seem so bad... Then I thought of you, only friend I knew, and I didn’t think you’d mind... So I sent you part of my shakey heart, and your words came back, so kind...... You will never know how you helped me so, even gypsies sometimes cry... I am pretty tough, but it’s not enough, when you’re shot down from the sky... When it all fell in, I knew there and then that I needed someone other than myself...I knew, that I needed you... You were there for me, my Brother...... You’re so very kind, with a gentle mind and a wise and tender way... In these sister’s eyes, you’re a cherished prize, and no words can really say... But I hope you know that to me you’re so much more than just a friend... Now I think of you as my Brother, here in my heart until the end...... Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 10-09-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sunny this is SOOOO beautiful and shows your heart in every single line. There is one happy man out there just knowing of your heart and soul and I know that he has got to feel the same about you or he would have to be crazy. Your "brother" or friend...is one lucky man indeed. Superb penning from you my friend. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I am pretty tough, but it’s not enough, when you’re shot down from the sky..." What a wonderful tribute to someone whose captured and cared for your heart so tenderly Sunny! You are so fortunate to have found such a wonderful friend. Beautifully written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Sunny, you've made me smile N tear at eye with such profound expression in your rhyme Thank's for sharing your tender heart once again Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ A loving thanks to one who reached out to you. You deserve to have that. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Mark ~~~ Thank you, my friend, and very glad that you liked this one!! My Brother is a special man who has helped me more than I can say. I am blessed to be a part of his life......... Follow your dream! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Kit ~~~ Yes....I am very lucky to have such a wonderful brother, and he deserves any tribute I can give. Thank you, Kit, for your reply...it always means a lot to me! Follow your dream! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Coco ~~~ Dry your eyes, my friend....as this was a happy tribute to my Brother, and he wouldn't want you to cry!! Thank you for stopping in to read this..... Follow your dream! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Marge ~~~ I always love to see your name on a reply because I know that you read not just the poem, but you feel the meaning behind it. Thank you so much for that, my friend....... Follow your dream! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this sounds so familiar for me, can relate on this too...and in these day of hurt and pain, its always good to have someone near,who lent his shoulders. love and enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Charisma ~~~ Hello....nice to meet you, and yes...it really is a good feeling to know that there is a special shoulder that is there when you need it. That's what family is for!! Thank you for visiting, my new friend! Follow your dream! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, A wonderful piece of writing. Enjoyed this very much. Sy |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sy ~~~ Oh...thank you so much, and it's so good to see you here!! I'm glad you enjoyed this, as I felt good writing about someone who opened their door to me when I needed it. When all else fails, family is always there. Thank you again...... Follow your dream! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny girl...what a lucky brother you have darlin... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Paula ~~~ No.....I'm the lucky one. When I needed a strong shoulder to cry on, he was there for me, and helped me through some events that I couldn't have made it through alone. I will forever be grateful. And I am also grateful that I have a twin in you......You are very special.  Follow your dream! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I am pretty tough but it's not enough when you're shot down from the sky." Sunny this is a very nice gentle reminder that none of us are an island and at some time in our lives no matter how strong we are we need someones shoulder to lean or someone special to be their for us during hard times...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sunny~ Beautiful piece...very loving You’re so very kind, with a gentle mind and a wise and tender way... In these sister’s eyes, you’re a cherished prize, and no words can really say... But I hope you know that to me you’re so much more than just a friend... Now I think of you as my Brother, here in my heart until the end...... ...special indeed Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ James ~~~ Yes......we all do need someone, and when I called out, my Brother was right there. This is just my way of saying thank you to him. And thank you to you, for reading this!! ~~~ Tracie ~~~ Hello, my friend, and I do enjoy seeing your name today!! I'm glad you liked this poem, as it is special to me.....as special as the person whom it was written for. Thank you for coming by today!! Follow your dream! |
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