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Marilyn
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0 posted 2000-10-07 09:12 PM


Listen ...

hear the silence
of the eerie
hallowed halls.

Empty footsteps echo
where there's none there
left to call.

Sunshine...

Just a memory
Of happiness once gained.

Laughter...

long forgotten
pass in ghostly
moonlight rare.

Then in dreams
of windswept mist
her hand upon his heart.

There in dreams
they ever live
two lovers...

never lost.



When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep;

How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face...

William Butler Yeats

© Copyright 2000 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2000-10-07 09:15 PM


Oh Beautiful!!!  Simply beautiful!! Love it
Excellent Marilyn    

Maree < !signature-->

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"


[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 10-07-2000).]

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-10-07 09:24 PM


Wonderful Marilyn! Such a mystical feel about these words ... hauntingly lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-10-07 09:28 PM


Marilyn~
That lovely title brought me in ...
enjoyed muchly.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2000-10-07 09:42 PM


OOOHHHH! Marilyn, this is great!!! What a wonderful touch you placed on this one....I've missed you!!
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 2000-10-07 09:57 PM


Welcome back Mar - nice re-introduction!  
tracie66
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6 posted 2000-10-07 10:37 PM


Marilyn~
Wonderful imagery and so serene
Loved it
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Alwye
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7 posted 2000-10-07 11:45 PM


It's so great to have you back Marilyn!  Very beautiful words, I really enjoyed this!  

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2000-10-08 12:12 PM


Now this one made my night.  Excellent read and one for the books...PERFECT title too btw
Marilyn
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9 posted 2000-10-08 11:26 AM


Maree....I am glad you enjoyed it so. Thankyou.

Kit...Your words touch me. Thankyou.

Marg....I am glad the title grabed you and drew you in.  

Mike....If you only knew how I have missed all of you. Thankyou for the wonderful welcome home.  

Chris....I am glad that this re-introduced myself so well. Maybe I should have used something else??..lol. These standards might be hard to live up to..lol.

Tracee...I am very glad you liked it so much.

Krista....I am glad this tickled you so.  

Mark....you make me blush with your compliments.  

Nan
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10 posted 2000-10-08 01:02 PM


Ah yes, coming back in style, I see...
Denise
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11 posted 2000-10-08 07:09 PM


Beautifully done, Marilyn!! So nice to have you back!

Denise

Marilyn
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12 posted 2000-10-08 11:12 PM


Nan....Thankyou for such a great compliment.  

Denise...It is so great to be back my friend.  

Victoria
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13 posted 2000-10-08 11:15 PM


Love it Marilyn..so lovely..
Rex Allen McCoy
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14 posted 2000-10-09 10:29 AM


Marilyn ... wow ... nice to see you posting ... and what a poem ...
beautifully done

Rex

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15 posted 2004-05-16 08:45 PM


nice
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