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I just can't be your Backstreet boy !!!
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I just can't be your Backstreet boy !!! |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
I just can't be your backstreet boy!! You don't like the way i style my hair, You don't like the way i show i care. You hate my look! you hate my pose! You tell me i don't suit my clothes! You always say i'm out of touch! You always say i spend too much! I'm always wrong! I'm never right! You'd swear to me that day was night! You've never told me of you're love! I give you all, but thats not enough! I'm not a door mat!, I'm not a toy! I just can't be your backstreet boy!! |
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Horizon Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 51 |
But will you be her Teddy Bear? Sorry little Elvis in me. This is a great poem, just be yourself thats what a girl wants.  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent expression Collins! All we can be is ourselves, and know that this is enough. Wonderful rhythm and flow throughout these words, really well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You really told her! Good poem Collin!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sure. . . but could you be somebody from N'Sync? LOL  I love this!!! This is perfect!!! Well said!!! ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
that was great, I hope shes excepts you for you..or as Joni Mitchell says " you don't know what you go to its gone!" I feel sorry for her.. BirdeeB  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this... If she could show a little appreciation she might get some satisfaction...James |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
Thankyou for your really encouraging replies, Cheers!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem was really great. I loved the way it was written. Wonderful!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi there the title caught my attention and i just had to give this a read very heartfelt sentiments penned thanx for sharing |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
Thanks Kalie and Dopey dope, glad you enjoyes it!!  |
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