Open Poetry #10 |
Right Next to Me |
snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
It seems as if The days drag on; The anticipated nights Hardly exist. But, baby, I'll make it through Because I know You're around. The entire world Seems to go against My routine; All seems to contradict, Even threaten, My comfort zone. But it's all right-- I can endure it all Knowing I'll be Standing next to you. It's easy to go through The hard times; I can survive, Just so long as You walk beside me. Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know this feeling...when you have someone special and you want to always be with them...James |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
It's so nice to know that we can survive as long as we have someone next to us. I enjoyed your poem. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thanks for reading, James! Glad you liked it, inot2B!! sp |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Hey SP thanks you for your encouragement.. That was a great poem that you wrote, i think ever one knows what its like to love some one and to have that perosn by your side when the day is done.. "So don't judge me by my failures, only by my dreams" SR71 |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lean where your strength is and you will always be fine. Great read my friend. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
sp...oh this is so sweet...to have such a love to lean on...lucky you |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
BirdeeB: glad to help anytime I can (especially with my writing!) thanks for reading!! Mark: as always, thank you for the wonderful words of wisdom. I'm glad you stopped by and enjoyed!! Paula: thanks so much! glad you liked it!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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