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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-09-24 08:52 AM


A Sisterly Tribute to Sunny1

Goldenwhite sands would meet our feet
       and in your Sunshine Sunny1 greets
               somehow we know, there was a day
                          far away

we floated in space, cosmic energies
       glinting out there
                you and me

fate intervened, set forth it's plan
       we split off
                never to understand
                         ALL of the universe

and unrehearsed

we went and wound our way
       through seasons of life we've played
               though not with hearts
                       we're too smart
                                  not the sorts to be

upsetting all the applecarts

and lo and behold
look at the gold

that's been woven into our lives
         derived
                  from the most passionate things

never looking back
         forward we trod
                  seeking the face of God
                            in all that he surrounds us

in my mind
         my sun reaches through the skies
                    a blazing fingertip outreached
                                to that place there, on your beach

to touch your Sunnyone's face…
        again reunited
                    in your grace…….


< !signature-->

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ





[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-24-2000).]

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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2000-09-24 10:18 AM


Oh........'You are the Sunshine in my Life'!
I am at a real loss for words, and that is a first in my life!!!!  
      You are such a good 'sister', and to have you write this has touched me more than I can say right now!!
       Thank you........Thank you.....
You'll always have a very special place in my heart, I hope you know that, Karilea....
    
    
< !signature-->

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
    'the Present'!




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Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-09-24 10:48 AM


Karilea~
You're always reaching out -
what a sweet thing to have written for our Sunny1 !
Lovely ... just lovely.
(Can dig the format and color too !)
~*Marge*~


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Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-09-24 11:13 AM


What a sweet thing you are to have sent rays of your heart to one so close to you.  You are for sure "sunshine"
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4 posted 2000-09-24 11:42 AM


Sunny1 - you've added such a variety of spice to the forums, just glad to be able to know you through your words...

Marge, thank you...it's so easy to write for so many marvelous folk here...I guess the pieces may not be considered true poetry...but truly, tributes they be...

Mark, even through the gray, sometimes I manage to shine on...thanks...< !signature-->

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ



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Sven
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5 posted 2000-09-24 02:19 PM


From one Sunshine, to a Sunny1. . .

This is wonderful. . . simply wonderful. . .

  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-09-24 06:12 PM


Sven, both Sunny1 and I thank you...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


CocoBaci
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7 posted 2000-11-11 01:32 AM


Sunshine, I missed this one before so here I am just to let you know it sparkles bright just like you two Sunnyones

Coco
My apologies for my tardiness

peppermint35
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8 posted 2000-11-11 01:35 AM


It shines just like you both do!!!  Such lovely words are a wonderful tribute

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass


Marsha
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9 posted 2000-11-11 05:09 AM


Kari, I missed this one and I've no idea how I did, but I obviously missed a beauty. This is so amazing, the two of you are such amazing people. And you both deserve all the accolades I could give you. This is such a wonderful tribute, and such a brilliant write Kari, this is really marvellous.
Love this one.
Take care
               Majestic Mushy
                     M
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Kethry
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10 posted 2000-11-11 05:57 AM


Kari,
Sunlight and sunbright
sisters both in giving delight
brighten the day and light up the night
caring for those caught in dark's plight
winning for those, too tired to fight
God bless you both Sunbright and Sunlight.

Sorry couldn't help it. Congratulations to you both for the poem and the tribute which are both very good.
Be well
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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11 posted 2000-11-11 06:24 AM


A beautiful Tribute to Sunny1 and to
yourself...you displayed your pure and
golden heart in all its glory...Excellent
writing~

Sunshine
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12 posted 2000-11-11 08:44 AM


Coco, thank you for bringing this back to the light...you never miss a thing...

Peppermint, thank you...

Marsha, Sunny1 is definitely amazing...her work is always stunning...

Kethry, you're too cute for words...thank you...

BDC, I always look forward to your kind words...thank you {~,^}




Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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