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Open Poetry #10

Loves Labours Lost

English Rose
Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 211
Berkshire, England

0 posted 2000-10-06 11:49 AM

Loves faded ember
Glows with a muted passion,
Air that surrounds you
Tastes of wrongs forgiven.

I look into your eyes
And see me, in duplicate;
This nobody life
Is more than I can take!

To stop living the lie,
Give me a reason!
Once more, before I die,
Make me feel like a woman;

I beg you
Come to me,
I love you
Make me whole.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2000-10-06 11:55 AM

Sometimes the man who makes you feel whole turns out to be only half a man..spoken from recent experience..

English Rose
Member

since 2000-08-20

Posts 211
Berkshire, England

2 posted 2000-10-06 12:14 PM

Thank you Victoria for reading my poem.

This is a different sort of style to my usual effort. I don't like to conform to any rigid style in my work (or life for that matter)....I write from the heart and so what I feel is what you get!!

[This message has been edited by English Rose (edited 10-06-2000).]

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