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A Once Upon A Love Song
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A Once Upon A Love Song |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Once Upon A Love Song A song you sing, a delicious melody is a once upon a love song... it's clear to hear the intrigue of things Ears burn, passion rings I place my hands over my ears the beat of this drum is too loud Eyes closed, waiting for the sound to subside I lay my head on your chest let me just rest sing it slow and low please BloomingRose |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Eyes closed, waiting for the sound to subside I lay my head on your chest let me just rest sing it slow and low please powerful and intriguing. this tells a story all on its own. very nice work! take care. amy  "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sometimes a love can be too intense and all you can do is to trust the one that loves you and just let them hold you and comfort you in quiet. Those quiet times can be the truely memorable ones anyway...the ones of closeness,trust, and of course peaceful comfort. Excellent penning from you. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Classical Words BR a most lovely and delightful read. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love your song, and it remind me on the strong feelings that love can give. thank you for sharing it Charisma |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Amy~ I guess we all have a story to tell. A lifetime of memories that come and go. Glad you liked this one. Mark~ Quiet times are the comforting factor in an intense drama. Thanks for reading my friend. Tracie~ Glad you enjoyed. I appreciate your view of this as a classical write. Nice compliment. Thank you. Charisma~ Life is a song indeed. Thanks for reading btw, Charisma is a really lovely name. Your mom did well in choosing that one. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
taking it slow makes it all the more intense sometimes quiet comfort can be more passionate than high flames ... lovely melodies youve penned take care jm |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow, this was just wow girl. Can you tell I liked it?...lol |
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