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Open Poetry #10

On This Enchanted Path

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2000-10-05 08:48 PM

Muted footsteps scarce make sound on sodden forest floor.
Canopy above the ground en-shrouds this corridor.
Filtered rays from setting sun be-lie the time of day.
Set care aside , and matching stride , walk with me away.

Inhale fragrent scented air that flows on zephyr's wings.
Observe the simple balance that exists amoung all things.
In slowly metered harmony circadian rhythms chime .
Let delicate mechanics of organics measure time .

As onward through cathedral glade our steps we do re-trace.
Attuned to nature's nuances reflected by our pace.
Nomadic souls on pilgrimage brief granted state of grace.
On course again at evening time through this enchanted place...

The circuit whose completion now returns us to the start,
sheds that which by deletion makes us once more pure of heart.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-10-05 08:57 PM

What a lovely walk, I enjoyed this very much, thank you...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2000-10-05 09:02 PM

enchanted path u say, well it definatly is enchanting by your words

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-10-06 05:26 AM

DrMoose~
A truly lovely lilting piece.
Such serenity is found in these phrases.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

4 posted 2000-10-06 06:47 AM

Sunshine,
Got a weekend planned up north country ,guess
I've really been looking forward to it . Thanks.
Doc

Maria,
Not often I get out where I belong anymore,
but this way I can bring it home with me.Thank you.
Doc

Marge,
Thank you. this one was filled with memories
that I very shortly hope to renew. Glad you joined in .
Doc

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