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djjepp Junior Member
since 2000-10-05
Posts 14 |
You brought me out Of my shell I'm finally happy As you can tell It was your voice A very soft tone It was my choice To tell you on my own You've done so much To help me through Your magic touch And caring too Now it's my turn To help you through As we begin to learn Remember I love you |
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jc_poet New Member
since 2000-10-05
Posts 3 |
Very KEWL!!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I am glad that you came out on your shelf... liked it,  Charisma |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to Passions This is a lovely piece of writing....wouldn't it be great if we could all feel comfortable enough to open up and reveal to the ones we love our inner-most feelings. Oh, listen to me...I'm rambling aren't I? LOL Anyway.....I love this poem!!!! |
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Horizon Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 51 |
A wonderful Poem, very beautiful. It's nice to have someone in your life that loves you like that. [This message has been edited by Horizon (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
this is heart warming Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
djj, Welcome to passions, 5 replies is not enough for a first post. I liked your work and I think everyone should get another chance to see it & comment TLS |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
This is a very lovely poem. Welcome to passoins. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~DJJ wonderful work! true love is so wonderful! welcome to passions and i look forward to reading more of your work. take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very lovely poem! I'm a sucker for romance, so, I really liked this one! Welcome to Passions! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to Passions and it is so nice to see love being rewarded with love....so many times it is one sided and I am glad that yours comes from both sides of the rainbow. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DJ~ Welcome to Passions. Hope you will enjoy the stay. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions. This is sincere and nicely written. Look forward to reading more. Kathleen |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Welcome to passions,Enjoy the read. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
djjepp, Wow.. you have read my heart.. I am sending this to my wonderful love who did exactly what this poems says. Welcome to Passions.. I hope you enjoy it here. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
djjepp, this is a really lovely and sweet poem, I enjoyed it much Oh and Welcome to Passions |
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