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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-10-05 11:11 AM



The waters edge
Drowning in thoughts
A love blossoms
Beyond the tears

What is gone
What is to come
For the unrepentant
And the undeserving

What do you see
Such fascination in eyes
As we connect
And returned the kiss of life

Floating high and far
Midnight blue below the stars
Heavens sent heavens meant
In words, hearts and deeds deep felt

Heat in cold
Hearts racing
Minds chasing
Round old trees

A single touch
To ignite to inspire
Mind and body
Perfect harmony

Walk by the water
Arm in arm
In a world apart
Together in a single beat

Cold yesterdays washed away
In each single tide each day
In loving eyes that do not see
In destined lives meant to be

Another look takes away
Thoughts, words, fears
Clear the years
Light burns clear




Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling
From glen to glen, and down the mountain side
The summer's gone, and all the roses falling
'Tis

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-10-05 11:38 AM


What do you see
Such fascination in eyes
As we connect
And returned the kiss of life

Floating high and far
Midnight blue below the stars
Heavens sent heavens meant
In words, hearts and deeds deep felt
=====================
Cold yesterdays washed away
In each single tide each day
In loving eyes that do not see
In destined lives meant to be

Another look takes away
Thoughts, words, fears
Clear the years
Light burns clear
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funny ... ya dont look sick to me *smile*
but ya just might have a fever ...
or maybe its just the warmth ...
the glow of your light shining so beautifully
in the dark ... in this poem ...
love this one ...but of course  
later-love-seeing-your-light-gator
me

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-10-05 11:44 AM


you've managed to express that elusive ache I know too well...beautiful poem, Walter.  I liked this very much.
Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
3 posted 2000-10-06 11:59 AM


Beautiful and very enjoyable to read! Thanks for sharing!
EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
4 posted 2000-10-07 09:11 PM


Great writing Walter, as always!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
5 posted 2000-10-07 09:52 PM


Walter-Nicely done, I liked.
Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2000-10-07 09:53 PM


What a wonderful read Walter ... I really enjoyed your thoughts in this piece ... very nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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