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Wintering Haiku |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Wintering Haiku icicles winking soon under slender moon white snowflakes welcome frost out, warmth within emerald eyes smiling now fiery memories snowmen dance at night under winter’s starcased skies eliciting sighs peaceful solitude in fair dreams, hark midnight’s bell come toll spring too soon 5 October 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I am a lover of winter, and snow storms..and below 0 temps..this is just beautiful, prepares me for what lies ahead....  Greeneyes~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
The first snow has already fallen here, and you Haikus are in perfect harmony with the picture lying outside my window!! Magnificent!!!!!!! Follow your dream! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Greeneyes, Sunny1 - the clouds are gray this lonesome day and winter's in the air soon snowflakes will drift on down into a snowman's eyes I'll stare... thanks for reading! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Ahhhh, love the winter its my favorite season There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Normally I would reply in Haiku but I could not take mine to the beauty in which you did these. So, please allow me to say Beautiful in every way. No DOUBTS on that one at all. I love winter too so maybe that helped me to be partial to the magic of these. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Maria, thank you. Mark, after growing up in CA, I appreciate the marked change of seasons...and look forward to every one...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Getting out my parka and gloves. . . waiting for that first snowflake. . . Excellent my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks, Sven, for reading...it's getting chilly here, as well... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
my goodness, i do say these are fantastic! a wondeful set of haikus that paint a lovely portrait of winter. "snowmen dance at night under winter’s starcased skies eliciting sighs" i liked that one a LOT! Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sunshine~ You make these look so easy, you have done a wonderful job with this haiku...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I have to agree with everyone else, these are wonderful! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethan, Tracy, EagleOne, thank you all for your lovely comments... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Karilea, these are so beautifully awesome!!! Melissa~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Beautifully expressed PoetFriendSunshine... I so much miss the winters back home and what you have written here have brought forth the memory of them2me... ThankUbunches4this and I shall keep this poem in my library so I can revisit the memory of the winter season time and time again... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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