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The Road To Forever
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The Road To Forever |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
Two who meet on the road........... Acquaintances are....... Acquaintances who enjoy the road........... Friends become....... Friends who have a spark ignite their hearts true........ Lovers do they become....... Lovers who pledge their lives forevermore.......... Married do they unite......... Married couples who remember the most important lesson of all......... Friends are they on the road to forever.......... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
eyeplus2, kind of reminds me of the book the road less travelled. very positive. Parker |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Very nice! Its always important what paths led you to your current location. Married couples remembering the friendship on the road is basic must, in this day and age though quite the opposite happens more often than not. Very good writing though, I really enjoyed it. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I really liked your poem, there is some real truth to what you write! Loved the format, good job! |
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