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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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i wake up in the morning from my temporary sleep where temporary lovers heated temporary dreams then it's off to pass the hours of my temporary day meeting temporary people on my temporary way i'll chat with temporary friends- flash a temporary smile and face my temporary tasks with con'temporary' style i'll place my temporary heart on temporary hold but my temporary happiness leaves me temporarily cold so when i'm temporarily dying breathing temporary breaths you'll see this temporary life brings a very permanent death -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
great poem, kinda dark in its content though. I liked it though. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
Interesting perspective on life. It is only temporary really. I like it.  Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Der Keit- thanks for reading. sorry about the dark content...was feeling a little dark when i wrote this. glad you like it. Waverly917- yes...it is just temporary, and it is what we make of it. glad you enjoyed this. -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Perhaps a cold slap in the face type reminder that while this life can be enjoyed, it is not the one we should concentrate on ? I like it, I like it TLS |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
TLS- So right you are. This temporary life is definitely not the one to be focusing on. Thanks so much for reading. Glad you liked. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
everything here is temporary...this is a gentle reminder of that..the mortal permanance of death seals the final chapter of our temporary existance.. until one day, we will never have to know temporary again.. good write tricks hugs, dg< !signature--> she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Though this life may only be temporary there are many beautiful memories you can make that are PERMANENT...they are out there you just need to put on the rose colored glasses and go in search of them. Great read and BTW...checked out your home page. Very nice. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes we have a temporary life, and everyone have his own little strive. you can face it grey, or with sunlight above. wake up tomorrow with a smile and with love, cause the power of love can warm your cold heart. all you have to do, is let it in and make a new start. hope you will feel better soon *hugs* Charisma |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- yes, this life is only temporary, but friends like you make it a permanently positive experience. (((HUGS)))Mark- you are so right, and i have many wonderful permanent memories. thanks so much for reading, and for the compliment on my homepage. Charisma- thank you...i feel fine now. was just having one of those days when i wrote this, but in no way is this how i choose to live my life. thanks for reading and responding. -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
excellent writing even if it is quite dark. glad to know that this was "just one of those days" and not your normal view of your life. in either case, awesome poem you have here. take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Amy- yep, was definitely just one of those days. thanks so muchfor reading. glad you liked it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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