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The Dance
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The Dance |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
May I have this dance........ But there is no music my love......... but there is......... Listen not with your ears...... Listen with your hand....as I hold it tight in mine.... Listen with your eyes.....as they look deep into mine..... Listen with your nose as you breathe deep the sweet smell of my love for you.... Listen with your mouth as my lips kiss yours with a desire so true..... May I have this dance........ Yes my love.....for they are playing our song........ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Absolutely Beautiful!  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
eyesplus2- this is really beautiful. i enjoyed it much. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
That..was..beautiful....sniff...where is that tissue box? The White Wolf PS That is the second time I have cried or shed tears of joy tonight. An emotional male. Who would of ever thunk it. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And the music plays on.......Wonderful read and so perfectly sung.  |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Sweet, beautiful, romantic... I've shared that dance but a few times. The music was always perfect. Thanks for the great poem, it made my afternoon. Trev. |
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