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| Open Poetry #10 |
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Ankles Twisted Shy |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Ankles Twisted Shy tattered washings snapping in the breath of winded bee's down 'round ankles twisted shy through tangled whispering trees, threaded life on songs of air on voices strolling by up through frail and cracking cage to neverending skies, secret times unfolding in days of wishing free hidden pieces falling slow, ...please just let me be. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SpitFire~ Dear one, I have no idea what this means but it sounds so cool, I love the way it rolls off the tongue.  -SEA |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Hi there flaming heart! Your sweet voice whispers free Now is the time to make it be Hugs and kisses sent your way All for smiles in your day Flaming smiles for you and your poem  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SpitFire, Hi you!! Wow to this one my friend!! It is wonderful writing. I like it . . . reads like a little song. So nice. I will let you be as long as you promise to be okay. Take care. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi there, good to see you. Your writing still strikes me very strongly. Hope you are ok. Sandra |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
sounds like alot of talking (whispering) behind your back. I understand the frustration you may feel...just keep your head high and walk in confidence. Great write from you tonight |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
spit fire--I love this...it is like you have taken your fancy and ridden it all around the yard. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Little spitfire~ I felt longing in this, not that I totally understood it but a longing I felt. HUGS Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SF ... i had to click on this just cause of the COOL title alone ... and the whole poem is WAY cool ... you have some very unique and creative metaphors here ... excellent imagery ..as well but what strikes me the most is how much emotion you have expressed in so few words. VERY well written poem. very cool indeed "secret times unfolding in days of wishing free hidden pieces falling slow, ...please just let me be." heres to getting free ... later-wrote-an-awesome-poem-gator jm |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
WOW! All the way through...WOW! Just love the way it flows, and the message, the wistful longing, and everything thing about it! This could only have been written by you. WOW! jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it.. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
taking a moment to say that this is just... cool. I know, a glowing reply, but I did it - catchy title! |
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