Seasons (a group of haikus)

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Open Poetry #10

Seasons (a group of haikus)

rosepetals25

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0 posted 2000-10-03 01:28 PM

Seasons (haiku)

Winter

The bitter wind blows
Thousands of snowflakes cover
The dried autumn leaves

Spring

Nature awakens
Restoring life once again
Beauty surrounds all

Summer

The sun shining down
Blue skies filled with white clouds
Filled with constant warmth

Autumn

Cool breezes flowing
Orange brown and red colored leaves
Beauty to behold

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~~Tara aka rp25

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SEA

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with you

1 posted 2000-10-03 02:30 PM

RP~ These are BEAUTIFUL!!! Excellent.

-SEA

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

2 posted 2000-10-03 02:33 PM

Tara - perfectly written - and thank you for not mentioning cats frolicking in the grass. That would have been too much.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2000-10-03 02:46 PM

Here she goes again.....trying to perfect perfection!!!!!! Excellent Haikus my lady of challenges met.

Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28

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on the roof again

4 posted 2000-10-03 03:47 PM

very lovely verbal portraits. i like how this is a collection all under "seasons" rather than four separate posts. i like them all (though i am partial to winter)

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

rosepetals25

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5 posted 2000-10-03 05:02 PM

SEA - Thank you again for your generous comments

LngJhnAg - lol.. you are welcome. I don't think I could fit that one in there anywhere

I'm glad you liked them.

Mark - I think I have a loooong way to go before I hit perfection..lol.. but thank never the less

Ethan - Thanks for stopping by

I couldn't break these for up.. they go together so well

I'm glad you enjoyed them.

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

Kit McCallum

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6 posted 2000-10-03 10:12 PM

What a lovely collection of Haikus Rospetals ... beautifully descriptive, nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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