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Natures Law
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Natures Law The pressures born to you this life Become your husband or your wife They form you, shape you, hold your hand They are your ring and wedding band. And nothing in this life counts more Then understanding natures law This theme repeats in all we do Each generation of renew. We are not strangers you and I We breath beneath a common sky And all the whys are common mill Designed to suit a common will. There is a demon in the land The misuse of the wedding band We live a finite sort of roam And cannot live without our home. Your life is mine and mine is yours Within the bounds of natures laws. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Profound truths... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Yo really are my sunshine. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This theme repeats in all we do Each generation of renew. We are not strangers you and I We breath beneath a common sky And all the whys are common mill Designed to suit a common will. There is a demon in the land The misuse of the wedding band We live a finite sort of roam And cannot live without our home. Your life is mine and mine is yours Within the bounds of natures laws. ================ so lets bungle in the jungle baby  love the wisdom of this one ... may the circle be unbroken? as the world turns? the foot bones connected to the ankle bone?  your casa ... me casa ... did you have profound pasta for lunch? later-nature-boy-gator me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Wel if you call rice profound, the food of the masses, then I am guilty. LOL you make me laugh, bless you. Sy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, I've seen you...and you make me smile! Thus making it way too easy to remain your Sunshine! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This one is VERY well done, Sy  Sunshine, you saw Sy and didn't stop by to see me????? I'm crushed!!!!!!!!!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You want to make it moon shine? LOL *L* Sy Balladeer, That very from you means more then you know. See you soon. Sy |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Hello Seymour, I just had to peak on this piece and I must say that I really love it. It's excellent, so profound, deep and truthful...damn, it's really that good man! This piece is definitely one of my most favorites of yours. Once again, excellent read! Nathan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nate, Nice of you to drop by and I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. Sy |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sy, No truer words spoken, very nicely put. Sometimes when I walk in the park, I think about geese, that they mate for life and admire their simplistic duties and only wish people be more like that, but we seem to be so much more a complicated breed. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
S.T. You have made alot of sense with this post, some people believe that marriage is like a VCR when it gets a few years old and doesnt have all the latest features, throw it away and go for the younger DVD. Some people dont realise that relationships take work. I enjoyed this piece very much and It makes me think. Thank you. Take care Olias |
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