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Beloved Moon |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Beloved moon The moonlight shines down From the velvety night sky Lighting up the world Steady light glowing Offering it’s guiding strength To objects below Subtle shadows dance Gazing towards the beloved Mysterious moon |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OH girl...how seductive...wonderful |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
very beautiful...makes me want for the night instead of a Monday morning lol...no really very nicely written |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay so we are doing moons now are we? Lovely penning from you and what poet wouldn't love the moon? Too much romance to pass up... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Paula - I'm glad you liked it!  Thank you for stopping in  jinxed - Thanks for the compliment! I would much rather have night than a Monday morning  Mark - I have always loved the moon I must just be on a haiku kick this week lol. Thank you for stopping in ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So take Ethan's challenge but read the rules first....it is in the challenge forum |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent rp. . . The moon is a wonderful inspiration. . . and is shows in these. . . Well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
oh I love the moon and you have painted a perfect picture of it There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Rose This is a beauty. Wonderful writing! Deb |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
love these....the third one is my fav.. wonderfully conceived ... yes do the challenge... take care jm |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark - I went..I read... I posted Sven - Thank you! I have always loved the moon so these were easy Maria - I'm so glad you stopped in! Thanks Bloomingrose - Thank you I'm happy you enjoyed them.JM - How nice to see you stopping in to visit again I have taken the challange.. of course Thanks for the nice words ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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