Open Poetry #10 |
Pledge |
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Keep gentle thoughts, evermore, lest misfortune, finds your door. Keep loving thoughts, in your heart, when those in envy, take you apart. Keep thoughts of hope, burning bright, to guide your way, Through a foggy night. Hold steady thoughts, when the river does turn, when the waters of peace, begin to churn. Hold dreamer’s thoughts, to your breast tight, when reality pulls, with fierce might. Be empowered by hope, and all things true, let no doubt, or fear poison you. Keep your mission clear, keep your path in sight, let your addiction be freedom, let truth be your light. May your voice be strong, but your words always kind, And may the ends you so seek, be not too hard to find. May your promise made today, be held through the new morrow. May your life know but joy and stay turned from all sorrow. And may you know from this moment till the last, till the end, that in me you have found one eternal friend. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds like an IRISH pledge....I am Irish and this would fit right in with the country settings of Ireland and all the well wishes you receive up there. Excellent verse from you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
perfect...and it does have the feel of a poetic sampler...reads like a hug, well done seraphin... |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
i wish i could print this out and send it to my closest friend...claiming it to be my own. a piece that will never fade. inspirational enough to hang above my bed so that it's the first thing i see every morning. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Mark, my thanks..again! I sent it to a friend of mine in Ireland, and he did agree with your comment. I hadn't thought of it in that light before. Serenty and Weaubleau, thank you for your comments, too, as well as taking the time to read it over. I do appreciate it! |
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