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Spoons in the Night
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Spoons in the Night |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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(Skirting the limits again  )Late night - rolling in bed You roll too - nothing is said Contact made, bodies touch Like Pavlovian pups, feeling much Stimulus - response, autonomic My skin tingles, thoughts atomic More contact -more stimulus More response, thinking clouds cumulus "What about Our angels sleeping?" "Can take care of that" said leaping Rose and chaired the door 'neath handle To the dresser - lit a candle Sleep had quick begun to nod you Sliding back in bed I flew Quietly, like spoons in a chest Fitting together head to rest Behind yours upon the pillow Arm on your side soft as willow Hear your low voice hum "Mmmmm" slight Holding tight, spoons in the night Cup my favorite and nuzzle neck Warmth builds, closeness increases Laying palm on nether region Savor flavor, feelings legion Fingers intruding, quiet reigns Finger moves up, where it deigns Spreading pleasure, kisses deepen You turn on your back, your kiss creepin' Draw me down, hand behind my head To luscious kiss, easily led Tongues explore, sweet like fresh bread I'm in heaven, Love our bed Then finding succulence becomes a feast Kisses pouring everywhere Two tame animals - now fierce beast Leaving wetness on skin that's bare Hand drawn further in wetness Motions increasing, also devotion A cry begins, cover mouth with mine Our tongues meet again, feeling divine Squirming's increasing You roll back to 'spoons' I fit in - I nearly swoon Soft and sweet, oh so neat Take my finger in your mouth Gently beginning reciprocal moves Popsicle melting, flavors of south Returning digit back to its place More fingers moving, hands interlace Faces are now buried Yours in your pillow down Mine in your neck muffling sound Passion's now pound Feelings increased, pressure released Bodies subsiding, spoons residing Lovingly at rest, two birds in their nest. ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Offhand I would say that this is not "skirting the limits" , but rather weaving back and forth over all kinds of boundaries I loved it Liz |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Liz- Love can come by 'leaps and bound(aries)' and heat rises in waves distorting vision making mirages - reality comes from touch - I crave the wider auddience of Open - Feel the frutration of the few that admit they enjoy the heat of adult - watch the 13 there languish - because I did not write them to pass - or did not realize they might pass here. Thank you for your reply and courage. ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill---Two spoons, two birds....very hot...!! |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Once again, I am in awe! You do have a way about you!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Bodies subsiding, spoons residing BILL my man.....have you any idea......yeah I guess you do...lol.....you my friend are one talented little bugger with your words and the images they send. BTW.....the candle thing....only try it on one that you know REAL well.....none of this Don Juan or Mr. Romance for me..... just straight from the heart for one I love. Excellent penning once again. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Martie- Two's the magic number - and with butterflies and flowers - birds rank high in my sense of loving images - Thank you Seraphin- ~S~ - I really appreciate your response Thank you Mark- My humble thanks - kind sir - admiring words from a master like yourself -rate very high with me. Oh - and the candles - Ok - I'll accept the 'single special lady' - The final question: the magic number: "89" - why not "88" or "90"? - My guess: the combined Ages? or perhaps the year you met? - (jes nosey |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
There's nothing languishing about this, it's lovely in it's sincerity and refreshing in it's sensuality. Good job. Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
eighty nine because I counted what I had in my house and that is what I came up with....that is it....simple and to the point nothing fancy lol...besides it did sound poetically fitting as well.  Hope you are not disappointed |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wil, I have one thing to say to you. Naughty, naughty, Do it again. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Bill, as a moderator here, because I know you are a decent and sincere poet, I'm going to let this one pass but I have to warn you...please do it again  |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Kathleen- I try always to be sincere ~G~ - thank you Mark - Another thought: 20 better? Thanks for clearing up my concerns ~G~ Kethry- Ok - I will try ~S~ thank you Karilea- Love the bright sunshine - thank you 'Deer- I will do my best - Thank you ~G~ ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MMMMMMMM...you just keep getting me...well lets not skirt that one LOL |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Wil Whew! My goodness! Is it getting a little warm in here?  I loved it! ~G~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Paula - Perhaps raise the skirt? ~G~ RosePetals25- It's too early to turn the AC off - ~G~! Thank you both ~S~ ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Bill, Brings back many a happy memory... How young did you say you were..? I just had a passing thought... How many drafts you got on this one... Ho, ho... he, heeee. I have to tell you, risque with only your Finesse. Nice nice work friend, Dale |
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