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The Golden Key |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Golden Key Not a law but a simple gauge Given in store within our fate On stone on page from age to age Passing alone from late to late. We hold on lip a simple truth A weight that tips the justice scale Ignored by most mainly youth No host, no grail, no cloak or vail. It lives a presence day to day An essence in a simple core A bray, a say, a path, a way And stays in truth forever more. It brooks to you, to all that heed To look within your shoal the whole. It takes no breed to work it's deed Your pull of soul will pole the goal. Just do unto others each one As would unto thyself have done. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, your wisdom and your heart are showing...may I have permission to print this off, frame it and hang it in my office at The Firm? Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You may and God bless. *L* Sy |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh yes...isnt this how we should live? Treat each other like a valued friend no matter who they are? I cant say I always live like this but I certainly try and its how I have raised my boys |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paula, Your doing good just as you should. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Sy, Wisdom the sure expectation of things hoped for and this beauty shows the wisdom that you my friend posses, I am so pleased to know such a loving person and one with so much talent. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity, Thank you and the pleasure is all mine. *L* Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
On stone on page from age to age Passing alone from late to late. We hold on lip a simple truth A weight that tips the justice scale ===================== It lives a presence day to day An essence in a simple core A bray, a say, a path, a way And stays in truth forever more. It brooks to you, to all that heed To look within your shoal the whole. It takes no breed to work it's deed Your pull of soul will pole the goal. Just do unto others each one As would unto thyself have done. ================= what a perfect post for a Sunday sweetSY-guy me thinks you had the fruits from your wisdom tree on your cereal this morn. You and those last two lines ... are worth your weight in gold. later wisdom-handed-down-thru-the ages-gator *winkiewinkie* me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Dear winkiewinkie, your responces are a pleasure to read. Sy gator. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A wonderful poem to be treasured and read from time to time Beautifully written by the master Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ While the wisdom of this piece was well stated - I was most impressed with the subtle internal rhyme scheme. Positively brilliantly executed. An enjoyable read-aloud piece. Thank you for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Some times I feel I'm a master of disaster. Love Sy Marge, How nice of you to notice, thank you. *L* Sy |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Master Sy Gator perhaps... Disaster...Never!!..  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, Ditto the subtle rhyme. It moved it along smoothly. I liked the sentiment and loved the poem. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dear Sy, please know that I have copied, pursuant to your permission, this excellent example of "law" at its best, and it resides where the Vision Statement once resided, as I deem it more appropriate to my outlook, and I do so appreciate your gesture of sharing. Your kindnesses remain in my heart, and I thank you... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Thank you *L*. Kethry, And thank you with *L*. Sunshine, And you will remain in mine. *L* |
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