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Marking Time - For MarkB ... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Marking Time ~*Marge Tindal*~ - 12 - - Marking Time - 11- Every little minute -1 - of every day that has you - 10- in it ... ticks through the -2 - dawning of ideas enfolding the - 9- memories of time on the face -3 - of a clock upon the wall that - 8- knows no end of our time at -4 - odd hours of the night as - 7- if rewinding it would -5 - make it last - - 6 - ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And leave it to Marge to set time at a stand still for us to enjoy. Wonderful Marge and You KNOW that I love it and I love you my friend. Wonderful challenge entry!!!! This cowboy is smiling now. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Hey Marge ... I opened this post at the same time that reads on your cyber clock Strange things are happening lately ... ? nice job ... 'the force is with you'  |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Outstanding! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very creative, Marge! Denise |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This is SOOOOOOOOOOOO Good!!!!!!!!! You all amaze me with your creativity.......Again, this is great! Jenn E |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
marge- this is great! your creativity never ceases to amaze me. love ya, vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WAY COOL MARGIE-GIRLIE... very imaginative and clever... with a timeless message in your verse later-tick-tock-gator  me |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--this is great...terrific time keeper..I am not even going to try this challange... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ I always enjoy knowing you're smiling ! You're one a-okay guy ! Rex~ Coincidental? Perhaps, who knows? Thanks for looking in. EagleOne~ Thank you my friend. Denise~ Glad you like it. It was fun to do. JennE~ Come on gal ! Give it a try ! We're all learning here. Thanks for enjoying. Vicky~ LOL ! And YOU'RE the one with the new web page ! Put your web page in your profile so we can all take a peek ! JanetMarie~ LOL ! I was going to title it Tick-Tock but want to MARK it ! Martie~ Sure you will ! I'm VOLUNTEERING you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
TANFASTIC... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge* I want to have your imagination for just one day....heck one hour would be enough to last Me a lifetime!!!! So very cool you are |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Marge, this was fabulous! What creativity! sp  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge, What originality! How you thought this one up I don't know..but it was a delight to read! rp25 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Thank you. ButterfliesDC~ Oh, sweetie ... what a sweet thing to say. Thank you. SnowPants~ Glad you enjoyed it. RosePetals~ Well - Mark asked me to do a formatted one for his challenge ... and I decided it was time to get to it- Thusly ... there was the idea ! Thanks for your sweet comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is so good, I'm constantly amazed at the creativity I see all around me here. How wonderful to be surrounded by so many beautiful souls, who display their beauty moment by moment, and eternally. Thank you  Marsha |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, hickory, dickory have nothing on you. You run up a clock like you were born to it. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is wonderful, Marge!!! What a beautiful way of depicting time. I love it!!! And I love you too! Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marge,...give me some of that talent would ya? You are so cool. This is so neat. Take care of you now. *Peace. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"as if rewinding it would make it last" Superb Marge! Excellent in both presentation and content!!! I loved your ending words ... how many times do I wish that were true! Loved this Marge!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Some of us are more dense than others - - I was trying to find a second message in the red letters LOL - till I read the replies and realized they were clock hands DUH! great job - and so very imaginative (I'm so lazy - I'd have made the time 9:15 LOL) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ So glad to have people like you to share with. Kethry~ Thanks, hon. Lil'Lizzie~ You KNOW I'm happy seeing your little face on these pages ! LOVE YOU ! SpitFire~ I gladly share ... thank you for that sweet reply. Kit~ I can always count on you to find that special phrase. Thank you. Wilfred~ Oh, Wilfred ~ Oh, you mean that secret code ??? Maery dayck seas me pon end ourif ?? Don't tell anyone, but you need a special de-coder ring ! LOL ! Now cut that out ! ! ! ! You've got me laughing so hard I can hardly get this finished ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ROFL--and yes--MAO!!! This is a true beauty! and your replies are priceless, (serenity fondly twists her secret de-coder ring...) oh my...LOL... Thanks Mom. You're #1. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Great job Marge! Beautiful work! Love it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSerenity~ LOL @ the 'de-coder ring' ! You are truly PRICELESS ! Insect~ I'm really glad you popped by to enjoy. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ This is great, what a fun piece of poetry Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thanks gal. It was a fun piece to do. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
How in the world did I miss this one??? Maybe I drank too much wine last night. *chuckle* I love it! You are so clever!< !signature--> ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture [This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 09-25-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- well, lookie what i found back here! i just love this one..and i think it needs a ride to the top, for both you and our resident cowboy. counting the minutes until our cowboy rides back into the forums.. hugs to you, -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-19-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Chanson~ Well- it's high-TIME I thanked you. Thanks to Vicky for rewinding the clock ! Vicky~ YEP ... it will be sooooooo DEVINE when our COWBOY comes back ! I think we shall have to throw a PARTY ! I've got the alarm clock set - how 'bout you ? He could ring my chimes ANYTIME ! You are just the GREATEST ! Love n' *hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge~ This is really awesome! How do you think of these things????? What an imagination you have! Deb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ I just LOVE having a reason to come back in here and reply ! Thank you soooooooooo much always for your thoughtful comments. Tee-Hee ... it's soooooo fun here ! It won't 'bump' so that you would know that I give a gosh-darn that you cared enough to leave me a note ... but it should turn a ghostly white/silver shade on somebody's computer screen ! LOL ! What forward advances we've made ! Sending *hugs* ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Unreal! Vicky is sending me these so I can learn to "draw" WOW, these are awesome poems and the designs are really cool! "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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