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Until You
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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I dedicate this to a very very special person. Until You Quietly, patiently, I wait Waiting for you to awaken me Although I breathe softly My blood flows gently And my eyes are open I do not live, I do not exist Until you appear When you enter my world You flick the switch Turning my spirit on Your presence brings life I'm filled with colour and light Alive and vibrant You transform the dull and drear Into a sizzling, fizzing fire I melt from the inside out Dissolving into rainbow hues My iced soul is bathed In golden light Your smile fans the flames Building the fire higher Engulfing my heart in heat I drown eternally in your eyes Caught in a mesh of fire Only you have the key I willingly cede the battle Thankful to be in chains To be a captive of your heart Marsha [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 09-30-2000).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marsha, Oh what a sweet touching poem to the one you love  Such tenderness is expressed here.. I'm glad you happy ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds to me like someone really latched onto you and sent you through the fires of passion. This is one sensuous poem from you and I know that this guy has got to be melting himself. Nice to see you so happy these days. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Rosepetals25 thank you for your kind words. Mmm yes he is very special, and I'm glad the feelings come through. I only hope he knows how special, perhaps I ought to bring him to the site and show him.   |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark you always say such nice things to me. Sensous and passionate, well there's certainly heat here, no doubt about that. As for the man this is for, I say that the fire between us is very sweet, and he's worth every flicker of the flame, and then some! Take care Marsha Am I happy, no I'm ecstatic, didn't I say love had an amazing influence. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey bubbly one! this is awesome!! how romantic....*sigh...* i think this may be my favorite that i've read of yours ..it flows with love and promise..and ..well...WOW! i'm so impressed  and just who is this mystery man..???  'great writing bubbles!! hugs,dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee, love don't ask, anyway he's not your type, and boy am I glad he's not, otherwise you'd snaffle him too. (Oh great now I'll get into trouble for calling him a type) Well you know me, I've always suffered from foot and mouth, everytime I open my mouth I put my foot in it. Glad you like it, but as I say just don't put one of your gems close by this or everyone will know this is a fake and yours is the real McCoy. Speak to you soon Bubbles (and don't stay up all night lofting you little devil!)  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I melt from the inside out Dissolving into rainbow hues My iced soul is bathed In golden light Your smile fans the flames Building the fire higher Engulfing my heart in heat ================== WOW..does all that hurt *smile* .. I KNOW..."hurts so good" this a wonderful sensual declaration ... aint love grand ... inspires us to new heights ... and heat LOL...OH yea great read....well written and expressed work here take care jm |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Janet So you can feel the heat, can you. I must be entering a new phase, I'll call it my burning time. Does it hurt, only when the flames get out of control. It's not that I mind the fire brigade turning up. It's just those sirens they don't sound as musical as they should. Thanks for stopping by Marsha (Now who was it who told me not to smoke in bed? Ahh well I guess I'll have to keep the flames on a gentle roar!!) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marsha, This is so beautiful, its so nice to have a love like this, I wish you the best. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Cerenity thank you, sorry I've taken so long to reply I've had to take the 'puter to the 'puter hospital, and the dear little thing has only just come back. I'm glad you like this. Take care Marsha |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So nice, I have one I feel this way about...James |
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