Open Poetry #10 |
Sharing Hearts |
Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
When we share hearts in loving bond < !signature-->As deeply as sea’s clash is loud; Smooth motion over obstacles~ Together~ flows with hands clenched proud. When cool dawn brings no balmy sun And rough storm churns skies overhead..... Attempts to strike its lightening rod, Unravel ropes to baring thread..... Clasp tight; grasp firm, with arms console, Secure my warmth into your strength. Put thunder's scare to respite quake, Dry soulful clouds; make short their length. When we share hearts in calming bond, Our fears lay quelled, fall underdressed. When we make one, the siege abates; Life's worries fade to nothingness. ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture [This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 09-30-2000).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Chansondegeste~ this is great! -SEA |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Sea, your kind words mean so much! Thank you ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Chansondegeste~ You are most welcome I like this very much! -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I thought this was truly beautiful! Kathleen |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
How wonderful. ...sigh... I love it. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Irish Rose...Waverly, thank you!....very much ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This is really lovely, a beautiful poem, excellantly written. Take care Marsha |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Once in a while I get caught in the current so I go with the flow Thank you Marsha ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Chanson, what a lovely piece of work you have created here. This was a pleasure to read. Juls |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Tis the only way to live life is it not? Lovely poem my friend. Love seeing the heart side of you in each word and line. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Juls, I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for peeking in and offering your kindness Your visit is very much appreciated~ Mark, I guess I did put some heart into this one. Afterall, a heart is a terrible thing to waste Thank you my friend~ ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Love as it should be- may it continue to grow and strengthen - my wish for you - you've expressed this most beautifully~S~ |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
It helps to have good wishes from good friends. Thank you muchly, Wil ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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