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I Believe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I believe In long long drives In first hugs In softly whispered hellos And in you I believe In soft summer skies In katydids In starbright wishes And in you I believe In moonlit walks In morning kisses In drive in movies And in you I believe In chilly mornings In towering trees In water trickling in the silence And in you And all I ask Is you believe too |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh so perfect, went to see a neighbor child in Peter Pan last night, and we all clapped, young and old alike, softly whispering...I believe... and I still do! Well done Paula! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ this is so wonderful!!! I think this would make a great challenge by the way.  -SEA |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
I believe too! Asking others to believe too is not too much to ask, especially when they are such wonderful things to believe in. Great poem. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
"I believe In chilly mornings In towering trees In water trickling in the silence And in you" My favorite lines because I'm a sucker for all of those things. What a wonderfully peaceful image!! Great writing!! sp  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Paula~ wonderful imagery in this...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Paula, I like this style, and the happiness oozing out of every word. I'm happy for you. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ I believe in YOU ! Cause you believe in me ! This piece is enchantingly lovely. Softly serene ... and believable. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sometimes it is hard to believe but you make it sound so easy. Nice write |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
First of all let me apologize for letting this slip away... Sunshine...sometimes faith is all you need Sea...just what kind of challenge? Waverly917...well sometimes asking someone else to believe is the hardest thing to do Snowpants...glad i could pen lines you enjoyed Tracie...thank you catalinamoon....thank you it was a happy time Lady Marge...thanks for believeing Mark...no the belief never comes easy...but when its worth it you just try harder |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
excellent work, superb. right from the heart, so I believe in you! Charisma |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
now how nice is this? ... well done, Paula ... |
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