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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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0 posted 2000-09-29 12:34 PM


As I engage my gaze
on the page
I ponder still
until the time
renders me to disengage
my words that get jumbled by
these thoughts that go
faster than I could possibly
deem to surrender
My mind is a dream weaver
to which my body often surrenders
to the fantasies of new endeavors
that come my way
words that eradicate me from the quicksand
that we so often seep into
dive into the blue clear ocean
and sing a melody so sweet with
all new words that suddenly come in view
and astound the eyes that dream
a dream of such sweetness and surrender
into the land of fairytales
that do come true through
the imaginations of our heart and mind.

© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
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1 posted 2000-09-29 05:32 PM


Dream on Rosebud,
It's a beautiful fantasy and a beautiful poem.
Kethry.


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

SEA
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2 posted 2000-09-29 05:37 PM


Rosebud~ this is enchanting   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Rosebud1229
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3 posted 2000-09-29 11:57 PM


thank you Kethry and Sea I'm glad you were enchanted Sea
vlraynes
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4 posted 2000-10-23 05:16 PM



Rosebud-
   this is so beautiful.  
   keep dreaming...fairy tales
   can come true.  

   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Rosebud1229
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5 posted 2000-10-23 05:20 PM


thank you so much Vicki, Life would get pretty boring sometimes but thanks to the imagination I can go far away into that beautiful fantasy. Calgon take me away!! well you know what I mean..  
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