Open Poetry #10 |
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My Curdling Halloween (for challenge) LJ Yoohoo |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois ![]() |
![]() Made me a nervous wreck. The shreiks came out so eerily The hair stood on my neck. For two years straight I've heard that sound That stood my hair on end. And, when I walked home late tonight I heard it once again. Real scared, I stopped and looked around There's nothing I could see. A cold chill then ran up my spine There's something touching me. I froze there for a moment, then I quickly spun around. My knees were shaking terribly My voice would make no sound. I felt a cold and clammy hand Brush up against my face. But when I looked into the eyes There was a vacant space. Two gaping holes where eyes once were My blood froze in my veins. That's when I got a real good look At what's called Long John's brains. There was this green slime oozing out And dripping through his eyes. Those eerie shreiks I heard that night Were Long John's pitiful cries. ![]() [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 09-29-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Starting out naughty this morning? rofl...thanks for the smiles...loved it! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh......this one is perfect!!! I'm sure LJ will love it too!! Great morning reading!!! ![]() Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL Karen! I couldn't resist when I saw "Things that go bump in the night." This is a repost way back from #3. hehe Sunny glad you enjoyed it! Thanks ![]() |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
brains but no eyes??? I always thought I had eyes, and no brains when it came to women. lol - Great poem... expect a response worthy of you, Rebecca. smooches |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rebecca, Whitedove blood curdling write looking at LJA would give anyone a fright If you see through the mask so sensitive and true you see a little boy waiting to shout boo I'm not surprised you heard him moaning and a wailing he was trying to match Lorelei and was badly failing. Keth. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rebecca~ ROFLMAO!!!! This is too fun! ![]() |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LJ both being green I could have mistaken it! LOL I will await for your rebuttal! ![]() Thanks Kethry and Susan! Glad you got a kick out of it, I know I have one coming ![]() |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Angel ROFL, this is great!!! wooohoooo loved! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
WhtDove, WooHoo green goo ! Doc |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks Angel! ![]() Moose yea, green goo! ![]() |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
ROFL ... great poem Rebecca, loved the flow ... and loved the ending! A wonderfully eery read, much enjoyed! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Glad you liked it Kit! Thanks ![]() |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
ROTFLMAO Becky..... ![]() ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteDove~ Can't wait for Trick or Treat ! This is really, really neat ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL ![]() Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks Bonnie! Glad it grabbed ya. Actually this came from some truth. Tell ya about it sometime. Marge thanks for poppin in and reading ![]() Thanks Denise! Glad you could enjoy this again. I had forgotten all about it. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
EEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWW......... I'm envisioning poor LJA with green goo pouring out all over... ![]() |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
But Nan! LJ looks good in green goo ![]() |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
ROFL ... nicely nasty Loved it ![]() |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
ROTFL Great read! Great writing! |
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