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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-09-28 07:18 PM


Fairest Maiden

Fairest maiden in this land
you reached for me to take my hand.
Even when my heart was blue
tender feelings flowed from you.

Fairest maiden I Love you
and all of my Love flows to you.
Fairest maiden please say you will
share these feelings my heart can feel.

Fairest maiden each time you touch me
my heart feels happy as it can be
and I find myself believing
my fair maiden cares for me.

Jameslee@September28,2000

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Paula Finn
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1 posted 2000-09-28 07:21 PM


Oh James...she must care hon...how could she resist?
SEA
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2 posted 2000-09-28 08:05 PM


James~*SIGH* you do it every time... -SEA
A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2000-09-28 08:59 PM


Your title caught my attention!!!Lovely Romantic poem...I can feel your longing for this person.
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4 posted 2000-09-28 09:39 PM


i love this one James..would you like some blue plumbago for her hair? haa..
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5 posted 2000-09-28 09:48 PM


James, you are, I swear, the MOST romantic man. What a lucky maiden you have. I hope she loves you to pieces. I like this poem a lot, my favorite type of write.
Sandra

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2000-09-29 03:11 PM


Thank you Paula, Sea, Romantic, Victoria, and Catalinamoon for the nice words.
Victoria yes I would like some blue plumbago. Could you drop it off tonight?
Sandra you are the sweetest..James

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-08-05 02:17 AM


One more time...James
LeeJ
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8 posted 2005-08-05 06:35 AM


Beautifully written and felt...hugs
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