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God And Tea
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God And Tea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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God And Tea God is coming this afternoon I invited him for tea. I asked to bring some macaroons We both adore them you see. It's not the first time he's been here Although he's busy you know He has a kind listening ear And he's never failed to show. I must say you can not see him His poise a soft unseen lie I don't know if it's just a whim But I never ask him why. He's helped me with my poetry Such an understanding mind. Said this is an epopee He is the kindest of the kind. The tea the usual success And thanked me the usual bless. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Epopee away... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow Seymour....Outstanding!!!!!  Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Oh ... how wonderful, my friend. I'll have a sweet sip of both ... I simply enjoy your mind ... Epopee, indeed ! And I thank Him for you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you *L* BSC, Thanks for the WOW. Marge, And I thank him for you. *L* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
As you thank him for Marge we thank him for you. This is splendid in every sense of the word. Loved it much. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- WOW!! This is wonderful! I have to agree with Marge...I truely enjoy your mind.  btw...can I havea macaroon...lol. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Another great poem. I loved this one, and I'm sure you knew I would. It's wonderful, Sy Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Wonderful comment, Thanks Vicky, Why don't you come when I invite him again? Elizabeth, Well you have an open invitation the next time we have tea. Love Sy |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Peaceful. Nice picture in my head... tea with the ultimate being. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Andrew, Thank you for the read and the nice comment. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh Sey, how beautiful this is! Is there room for three at your table for tea? Love this piece! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tennessee, Why of course It's an open tea. *L* |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i read this yesterday, Sy, and thought it was great, but didn't have time to respond... i wanted you to ask him a question for me, but it may be too late now, if He's come and gone lemme ask you this.... did He show up? how'd it go? did you get any kinda explanation for all this mess?  aw... geez... i'm always so busy and so late for everything......  and yet ... i want answers.... go figure, huh? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sy, my kind of thing you know Tea with God! Never thought of that, maybe I'll have to invite him over as well! Wanna join?  Wonderful verse Sy! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy...God and tea..now that's my kind of tea! I loved this! Excellent poem! I love macaroons too, can I be invited next time?! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Doreen, Well I'll tell you all I know, read The Slang Of Life. WhtDove, Why not he's easy to invite. Melissa, It's always open house. thanks. |
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