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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Beauty There is beauty in every face a twinkle a glow arch of lid breath of flower and to trace line and form is no miracle to sleight of hand but the heart light that grows and cascades from within [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
13 lines - summed up most perfectly in the last 3: "but the heart light that grows and cascades from within" no more need be said - another classic Martie creation |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Martie- this is beautiful.  really enjoyed it, as i do all of your writings. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie, may I be you for a day, just to see what "perfect" might be? Please? I hug you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Very true. Lovely poem. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
and to trace line and form is no miracle to sleight of hand but the heart light that grows and cascades from within Wonderful Martie "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~  And BEAUTY it is ! Love n' hugs n' all that jazz !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Martie, this is indeed beauty, utterly perfect. Really love this one. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Good Bi What a day..! [^@#$%*+]. I feel like Sheol is druged me into an early grave. Somehow after I had read a few lines from a night before I found it, should I say, fascinating because last night I was all ready for today (spiritually alert, wide awake) ready to take on the place. I remember too I was enthusiastic for it to greet me. Now that it’s here and I’ve met you I’m not so sure... However I am trying to be optimistic, looking for the favorable. I guess that’s easy for people as copious as the big Ds. advocates but with my little freedom of verse, I can only confess that I’m a day closer to rest. It’s getting easier to express such gnawing loneliness with phrase, but I suppose it’s better I shan't for this moment. It’s actually been hard for me to keep up an optimism for such futures & what was in it. I originally thought, and still do, that this is a spiritual thing. However, even with my many years of Biblical experience, I’ve gotten slushy and in no way ready for such an incident. In fact I don’t believe I thought this kind of rivalry could’ve happened and I regret you ever experienced it. Under other circumstances I could have maybe thought it could be likened unto such. But as it is an adversary has again been thoroughly articulate. if you found the time I thank you and if not all the same good bi Love you Martie take care... [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 11-17-2000).] |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
For a reason unknown to either my husband or me, we have both been cut off at the same time, from posting any new poetry at Passions. But for some reason, we are allowed to continue contributing comments. So I must say, if we are cast out, good-bye, my friend! We care about you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you Bill for your sweet reply. Vicky--I'm glad you enjoyed this...I appreciate you letting me know. Karilea--I you could be me, you would see that I am NOT perfect...but, thank you for being so wonderful. Poeminister--thanks so much for stopping by. Maree--thanks for the wonderful. Marge--thanks for the love and hugs and all that Jazz... Marsha--thanks so much for such a lovely reply. lucky--I will always find time for you...and no one can post in this forum now...because of the new open 11...this one is now just open for replies. Rosemary--I don't think you have been cast out...e mail me...check your mail. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This must be the shortest poem I have read from you hon... and it is a gem! Fullof wisdom and truth - thanks for the read my friend. K |
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