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There Are No Words To Say (700th post)
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There Are No Words To Say (700th post) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
All this time, I have been waiting, To hear some words from you, when the tears begin to fall, All that matter Is love, you have shown me how much much life don't really mean a thing, Is your love sweet enough, To say I say I love you, The heaven in your eyes, Is all I see, and that means everything when we make , There are no words to say heart to heart, speak from soul to soul, There is a silence , but there is sweetest thing when you touch me, that is when we say, from heart to heart, when the hearts are on fire, you never say a word about tomorrow, when the tears begin to fall, when there are no words to say I love you, When our hearts told us, so why we are holding onto words, when there are no words to say, there no words to say at all...... [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vandana~ this is beautiful and heart-felt....I liked this very much, especially the ending.....Congrats on 700!!  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There are no words to say heart to heart, speak from soul to soul, There is a silence , but there is sweetest thing when you touch me, that is when we say, from heart to heart, when the hearts are on fire, you never say a word about tomorrow, when the tears begin to fall, when there are no words to say I love you, When our hearts told us, so why we are holding onto words, when there are no words to say, there no words to say at all...... ---------------- vandana this is excellent ... wonderfully written emotions... "when the hearts are on fire, you never say a word about tomorrow" what a very cool line that is... very well written piece here to mark your 700th post... congrats take care jm "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" Lao Tze Tao ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes I can agree with you....wonderful poem, wonderful penned. *Congrat with your 700th*.... ((hugs)) Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow,thank you all!!!!!!!!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a lovely poem and Congratulations on your 700th post vandana.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you,Victoria!!!!!!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I liked the look at it from that angle I found it very soft and silent, but also the closenes without the words was very well presented...very good!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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