Open Poetry #10 |
If I... |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Temptations and wants I must give up, If I am to be accepted up above, Caring for others I must heed, If I am to earn my good deeds, Patience is what I must capture, Showing him that my faith is not ruptured, Sins of the past I must accept, If I choose to lead a life full of success, Faith in god I will gladly place, For he is the one who holds my life lace, Apathy is not what I must feel, For in heaven all my wounds will heal. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Ahh..A radiation of truth |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Xeonox, good to see you again! This is lovely, full of good truths...pop in to Spiritual Forum sometime...everyone there who don't come here would certainly enjoy just this type of message... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Xeonox, Enjoyed, follow this and you'll find the yellow brick road. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Xeonox, this is beautiful. Peace~ to you ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I thank you for your lovely responses. Thank you all for remembering me. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful thoughts... loved it. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
A lovely message to share, especially the last lines. Thank you. |
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