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Sunshine's Haiku challenge . . . finale
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Sunshine's Haiku challenge . . . finale |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What? No more gauntlets left? Take this: The waterfall's noise A placid pool lies upstream Life falls in between< !signature--> Live for love. Without love, you don't live. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-15-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Once I got started I had to stick it through to the end...this one is my favourite it's very beautiful!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it..I didnt know sunshine had a challenge..i was following your lead..ha..  ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Interloper, Well done. Keep smiling. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful haiku, methinks you've mastered them quite well! Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Strong, and well written. Much wisdom here. I haven't seen your work before, but I'll be watching when I visit! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
cool stream in moonlight rippling water 'round my legs tickling fish 'tween toes still enjoying your efforts... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
ethome ~ Kind praise from a master. Victoria ~ I am flattered. Don't follow too close, you might step in the same ... puddle. Daniel JD ~  )Poeminister ~ Thank you for the kind words. Mastered? Rosemary ~ My head is swelling. More, more )Sunshine ~ We thank your gracious Majesty. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ this put a beautiful picture in my mind.....  I sure liked this one! -SEA |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
okay, i get to play the dumb one here may i ask what do you mean by your third line? may be making a fool of myself but i interpreted this one as life is full of ups(placid pool) and downs(waterfalls) and that we are surrounded by such and cant escape from experiencing them.... will love to hear your thoughts |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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