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My Letter
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My Letter |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Should have read my letter read it line by line clearly you would see my heart didn't really shine I lost the love of yesterday traded it for clouds so should have read my letter so you could truly know could have had a second chance but now you'll never know what discontent was in the letter that really made me mad should have read my letter but now nothing will ever change change I thought would come about if only you had said how much you really loved me and how much you really cherished what we had as one but should have read my letter for all those feelings that once we shared, that really is quite rare for all my feelings I placed upon a shelf and the movers packed them up should have read my letter tear drops falling from my eyes sealing each page to the other telling you how much I would dread to see you gone from here but should have read my letter for now my heart is closed no more love inside and locks put all around but now that I'm gone you want to come inside but should have read my letter now all that's posted now is no vacancies for all love has departed from this place So my dear you've sealed your fate. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Your emotion is well displayed in this! I can feel the hurt. Just a little too late. I find myself not knowing what to say, except to tell you this really impacted me this morning. It really does speak volumes! You've written a great emotional piece! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Rosebud, I hear your frustration...like you want to grab the one by both shoulders who didn't read your letter...and shake. Hugs!  ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
that's all it is frustration, thx guys for the read sometimes just a little venting really helps, it's much better than yelling and a whole lot less stress. |
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