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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-11-15 05:55 PM

This Morning, Early

My cheeks were the color of roses,
flushed by the closeness of you.
That look in your eyes of awareness
edged desire, reflections of two.
In silent stare, I was lost again,
in the space between the lines.
Your words that kissed, to ease my pains
I savored, becoming mine.

I miss you more than you shall know,
I count each loss of smile,
Waiting for the wake up call
in your own artistic style.
The aching began the moment you left.
as I followed the path of the moon,
Last night it glowed a ball of fire
but disappeared, all too soon,

Behind the shades of gray that swirled
and felled me into deep
Of dreams that rose to color me
to warm me into sleep.
Removed the chills that iced my heart
to keep it's life on beat.
It won't be long, you shall return
to eyes, of silent speak.

~Wynter Bliss

**in my present state of mind, I am not too sure if I was inspired by any other than Christopher's "edge of awareness" phrase a few poems ago, as I had made some mental notes on some phrases of which I used here. If I borrowed or was inspired and you recognize something here, know that I am thanking you for touching me in such a way,that I kept them in mind.(sometimes I find a few unfinished poems and thoughts and can't recall where they came from, if other than my own mind... an age thing I think *s)

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"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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Sunshine

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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-11-15 06:01 PM

This is quite lovely, and the shape and pattern of your word forms lovely images...

well done...I am glad you were inspired...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2000-11-15 06:15 PM

thank you Karilea. I am trying my best to think some happy thoughts, although not too easy at the moment. {{hugs}}

~wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

3 posted 2000-11-15 06:19 PM

Nak,
Very beautifully written and very sad. Hope all is well. Cheer up.

"The aching began the moment you left.
as I followed the path of the moon,
Last night it glowed a ball of fire
but disappeared, all too soon,"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2000-11-15 06:30 PM

Good poetry and better therapy.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2000-11-15 06:49 PM

lovely words as always NT..

Enjoyed

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2000-11-15 08:25 PM

Daniel, I am cheerful, at least I feel I am...I think this weekend, bottom was hit...and the only way now is up...at least I am praying for that, finally. I will continue to bounce a bit more, I am sure...the big "D" when unexpected does that to you...and since I have never experienced it before, I guess I am doing the best I can. Thank you for reading huggzz

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"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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passing shadows
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displaced

7 posted 2004-06-06 08:14 PM

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2005-11-16 12:50 PM

Looking for some quietly inspired beauties this day ... finding the lovely of you among them~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2005-11-17 07:00 AM

It won't be long, you shall return
to eyes, of silent speak.

Thank you Marge..funny thing~~ I don't even remember writing this..but then again I forget what I write the moment after I post  them...

They are  diaries in my mind...

Thanks again for  your touch

M

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