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Open Poetry #10

Nauseating things...

The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-11-15 01:26 AM

was  i not

captured again by the corners of your eyes

so red s o      un( a live )

then again..
was i  not afraid to be denied

was  an  o r d i n a r y  pi    g
  ye t  i know  /these nauseating things

i bring them to life [in timid .uninspired .paranoid. ways]

theres no more surprises to tell
  theres no more hero's to kill

what can you do..?
when every day you wake up to be only you

only you..

theres a  l o   v e  song in my head
it will rep ea t and rape me
     with  c    a r e
     with someone actually there

but th e n again./
.. thats all i seem to be

it says to me...

im so glad to be al l i seem to  be.,.,.,,.

no longer afraid of the dark or midday shadows nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-11-15 02:23 AM

now this is an intriguing piece---

"when every day you wake up to be only you..."

"i'm so glad to be all I seem to be..."

okay, I know not the way you typed it---but I do like it, lots, have other ??? but will e ya about it, if it's okay?

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2000-11-16 09:48 PM

I loved this piece very much. Thank you for sharing.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

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