Open Poetry #10 |
The angels must have sent you |
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Whenever I think of you I want to call your name Whenever I see you I'm simply not the same ~~~ For all that you are All that you do Is simply all I need Simply I need you ~~~ You make me feel alive Make me feel content Help to keep my world bright You're surely heaven sent ~~~ Angels must have sent you To keep me safe and sound For my life is not the same Now it's you I've finally found ~~~ So here I am pondering Tender thoughts of you How you make my life bright Help my heart to renew ~~~ Hold me in your arms tonight Tell me this is forever more Gently kiss my lips Close your eyes Then I'll know for sure ~~~ That indeed the angels sent you To keep me safe and sound I'm simply glad they sent you As true love I've finally found ~~~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tracie, heaven sent. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ This is just BEAUTIFUL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A love this tender and beautiful is surely heaven sent...as is your gift of weave~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
tracie, A beautiful poem! I really really REALLY liked it ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
oooops... ~grins all sheepish~ Sorry for the double post. [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie, I love it, such a beautiful poem. Love it, and 'aint love grand Wonderful Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
~Tracie~ I just love this! SO pretty! ~SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hold me in your arms tonight Tell me this is forever more Gently kiss my lips Close your eyes Then I'll know for sure ~~~ That indeed the angels sent you To keep me safe and sound I'm simply glad they sent you As true love I've finally found ============ Sweet Tracie girls poetry had been full of angelkisses and granted wishes on stars of late ...Hmmmmmm... me thinks she is in love... and her poetry is heavenly inspired beautiful Trac... later-floating on a cloud-gator jm "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" Lao Tze Tao ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
This is so sweet. Beautiful Love. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Keth~ Hey sweetie heaven sent tis right Tracie~ Margie~ Thanks for stopping by like you always do, I do so appreciate you my friend Tracie~ Sweet butterflies~ I love your tender reply, always thoughtful Tracie~ Tara~ I'm so pleased you liked...I'm glad I'm not the only one that happens to ((double post)) Tracie~ Marsha~ Thanks hon for a great reply, I'm glad you loved it Tracie~ SEA~ Hello sweetness thanks for your lovely comments Tracie~ Janny~ My sweet friend Mmmmm me thinks your right Tracie~ jlocke~ Thanks for stopping by and checking my work, I appreciate it Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Just so precious Tracie!!! Bonnie |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, You have written your heart well my friend. So sweet, caring, compassionate and wonderful. Great work!! **HUGS** Love, Jen Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
tracie- this is so beautiful and full of love. you have expressed these emotions very well...wonderful write. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Open and honest love, right straight from the heart, full of warmth and feeling, very nicely done!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Bonnie~ Thanks for your lovely reply ~Hug~ Tracie~ Jen~ So glad you read this and liked...I thank you for your kind words ~Hug~ always Tracie~ Vicky~ Appreciate your comments and for taking the time to read this ~Hug~ Tracie~ ethome~ Your comments warm my heart.....thanks ~Hug~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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