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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song

0 posted 2000-09-27 09:53 PM


*This was my very first post in coming to Passions and now I have put a title to it and it is being reposted as I try to recapture some of the moments of my yesterdays.  It was not written for anyone but I would now like to dedicate it to a certain butterfly.*



The Peace Within Us


The peace within us
   is set forth
through our love
   and our desire

It exists in us because
   we openly choose
  to set our hearts free
and cherish what we share

This is a gift
   of life
  given for our purity
in trust for one another

It is bound in us
   deep within
  allowing us
the pleasure of truth


                   Mark Bohannan






[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-27-2000).]

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-09-27 10:00 PM


A truly beautiful poem Mark, and a lovely dedication to your Butterfly! Wonderful words lined with devotion and wisdom throughout, very nicely penned my friend!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-09-27 10:02 PM


MarkB~
I remember this beauty ...  
Liked it then ... think I suggested a title ...
like the one you picked !

*Hugging you my friend*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martie
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3 posted 2000-09-27 10:40 PM


Mark---thanks for posting this again..seems like that is just what my heart has been thinking...you do have such a beautiful heart!
BloomingRose
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4 posted 2000-09-27 10:45 PM


Mark,
This is really nice. I like the line...
we openly choose to set our hearts free.

Many times it is choice.
Hugs,
Deb

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5 posted 2000-09-27 11:15 PM


Lovely Mark..enjoyed..
Victoria
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6 posted 2000-09-27 11:15 PM


Lovely Mark..enjoyed..
Aimster
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7 posted 2000-09-27 11:19 PM


mark~
you write with such compassion and love. i remember this piece from when you first posted it.love the title you have chosen. excellent work mr bohannan  
take care.
amy   < !signature-->

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 09-27-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2000-09-28 12:40 PM


Kit-Thank you so much.

Marge-I am glad that you liked the title I picked.  It was one that was suggested. Thank you my dear friend

Martie-I am glad that my timing was good on this one for you.

Deb-Thank you my friend and thanks also for the hugs.

Victoria-thank you

amy-Thank you much but please no Mr.'s around here....makes me feel old.LOL


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9 posted 2000-09-28 01:38 AM


delightful

linda munday
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10 posted 2000-09-28 01:53 AM


Hi Mark,
What a wonderful poem, but have you been reading my mind, because the poem I just posted was along the same lines... (sort of).
Anyway I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Regards,
Linda Munday

Sunnyone
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11 posted 2000-09-28 01:58 AM



As always, my cowboy friend.....you wrote with your heart, even if it was a while ago.
Your style is only enhanced with time, and as long as you write.....these eyes will read!!  


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Janet Marie
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12 posted 2000-09-28 07:26 AM


The peace within us
   is set forth
through our love
   and our desire

It exists in us because
   we openly choose
  to set our hearts free
and cherish what we share
====================
I, for one have found much peace in you and the things of your heart you share ...
and I do cherish you
with in quiet comfort there is peace of mind
peace of heart and soul as well.
This early offering of wisdom ...
shows your open hearted spirit was looking for a voice,
once finding it in poetry ...
you have grown in your own light and have become a gifted and exceptional poet and friend.
It has been a beautiful thing to watch ...
love you my gentle friend
me  

Marsha
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13 posted 2000-09-28 07:37 AM


Mark I've liked your work always, and it's grown better and better. You have a sure and certain touch, and your words are always so beautiful. So I thank you for reposting this, for giving me the opportunity to enjoy it. It's a pleasure to see how your work has grown and I thank you for giving me something to aim for.
Take care
                          Marsha

Sunshine
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14 posted 2000-09-28 08:14 AM


Although I believe I did not help with a title, I do recall seeing this, and to see it again shows the growth you've been through in such a short time.  I'd say you need to put in a lifetime supply of ink and paper...
AngelEyes
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15 posted 2000-09-28 04:21 PM


You are very insightful...
This was a pleasure to read.
*S*
thanks for reposting it!

~~Kelley

To find the depth and meaning of true love you must search deep inside

Dee
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16 posted 2002-01-16 07:59 AM


Peace within us - something worth having, Mark. Something worth thinking about here.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

passing shadows
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17 posted 2003-01-14 02:51 AM


not new, but I am glad you reposted.
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