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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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Last night I sat all day in the sun dreaming with my eyes still open peering at the stars as they burned their radiant light from millions of light-years away to shine down just for me as I sat all day in the sun last night. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
mmmmm lotsa things to think about in this one yuh sit and think with my eyes open lookin out for that thousand points o light |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like the perspective of this poem. Nicely written. Poeminister |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
dreaming with my eyes still open...I love this line and the thought...lots here love this |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
MI, now that you think that way for me, I have to concur at your conclusion and find such peace in it... this, I like... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
MI- WOW...this is great! 'Last night I sat all day in the sun dreaming with my eyes still open' i just love this concept...awesome.  wonderful write! -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Ryan Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 297Kansas |
My head still wants to explode. But I'm not sure if it's the poem this time or the fact that I've been working on an evil, evil program for a good part of the last 4 - 5 hours. Probably the latter (especially since I haven't even read the poem yet *grins* ...one moment). Well, I'd guess it's the program. Yeah, definitely the program. Ryan Though I guess you could try hard enough to see stars in the daytime that it makes your head explode. Hmmmm. I like too many things and get all confused and hung-up running from one falling star to another till i drop. This is the night, what it does to you. I had nothing to offer anybody except my own confusion. —Jack Kerouac |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
intruder..very interesting.. i like abstract..and this is a bit that...  i like to dream with my eyes open too--that way, i'm more apt to remember them... this is a great little ditty  hugs,dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
really liked this, the symbolism used here, as the stars shine like the sun upon you at night. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty cool! |
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