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Haiku ( haiku ) |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa 
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Just for fun, or a rule of thumb ?? Haiku Syllables five down, Then seven to fit within, Returning to five, Olias |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
very well done Olias very well indeed! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
OLIAS... As far as I am concerned....this is the most perfect Haiku I've ever read!!  Follow your dream! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is just great |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Ethome I think this might be a little irreverant but its fun. Thanks for your response. Sunny1 Looks like I perfectly stated the obvious lol, but I'm glad you approve, Thank you. Paula Thanks for your response. I dont think its deserved though, It feels like all I said was 2+2=4 or is it 5,7,5 (lol) Thanks. Regards to all Olias |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
how about this? Not a Profound Haiku write five syllables~ other seven syllables~ a haiku is born! thanx for the fun  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
By George, I think he's got it! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Kaile, Good one!! I like  Sunshine I have.... but I dont spread it around  Thanks to you both for responding. Regards, Olias.< !signature--> I got the sun on my shoulder, and my toes in the sand, My womans left me for some other man, But I dont care I'll just dream and stay tanned. S.Bish [This message has been edited by OLIAS (edited 11-23-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
big smiles cool! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Thanks Wayout. glad you liked Regards, Olias. |
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