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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA 
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sunny day field lie down in wind blown grass cool blades caress my skin turn my face into the breeze into a smile as I watch the clouds white Rorschach shapes change me transform my sea of blue I'm Columbus looking for the edge of my world |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
hey rascalx...who ELSE will you be? This liked me a lot! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Thank you, Sunshine, I think all of us are different people inside. Sometimes we should all play the "schizophrenic" and let our hidden faces show.  ) |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
FABULOUS!!!!   ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
I love the expression "looking for the edge of my world." I've always loved to watch the clouds roll by but I've never looked at it in this perspective before. I like it! Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Thank you Doreen )Tara, Watching the clouds is only the beginning for me; rising above them to greet the endless blue is the daydream. Wanna join me? ) |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
Very cool poem and your "schitzophrenic" reply had me rolling. You have a great sense of humor |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice! i love this hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh my...I would LOVE to soar above those inkblot clouds of yours...what a glorious image...now i have to go find more of your stuff and indulge myself some more |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Tears of Grace, "we" thank you for complimenting "our" poem. (sorry, couldn't resist! ))dg, hugs back at ya! Thanks for the kind words. Paula, "inkblots" I LOVE IT! it fits the tone of the poem so well. Thank you; come soar with me! - Jeff |
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