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Deep Winter ( revised)) |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Deep Winter Soft silence in new snow on deep winter hillsides of gray, bare stands of oak with hickory mingling into shadows blown to windfall a leftover canopy of broken limbs tangled into undergrowth fodder memorial to a summer past... catalyst for the one to come. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hey, Robert! Nice to see you again! Beautiful poem! I could visualize the scene! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written Robert..enjoyed..  i wrote one the other day about broken limbs..a bad hair day for blooming leaves ha. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
reminds me of many scenes once visited, and the threat of fire's danger to come... well done... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertB~ You write so well. It's wonderful to see you ! Please visit more often. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
this a beautiful word picture scene....very well done!! enjoyed the read very much... ethome |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Denise, Victoria, Sunshine, Marge and ethome...Thank you. I will be here a little more now that we are approaching winter and things will slow some for me. I need inspiration and hope to find it inside this winter. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Now that's a poetic line if I ever heard one...'I need inspiration and hope to find it inside this winter'.....I'm sure you will! Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Goodness Denise.... I never thought about that line when I typed it. I guess I better start thinking about it though!! Thanks!!! if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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