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'Twas Only For A Moment Or Two
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'Twas Only For A Moment Or Two |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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'Twas Only For A Moment Or Two ~*Marge Tindal*~ I like the easy way you made me smile Touched my heart for a little while 'Twas only for a moment or two Still plays upon my face In memory of you Fondest remember This time last September I saw the way you looked at me Tucked inside as my favorite memory I like the easy way you made me smile |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Marge--sometimes it only takes a moment or two, for a memory that lasts a lifetime...and you write of it so well. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have a few cauual female friends like this...only see them occasionally and when we meet we hug and a friendly kiss or two and it feels like such a special moment..James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and yet they left a mark on your heart in that brief moment, didn't they, Marge... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I love the flow in this Marge ... sweet and tender sentiments. It does only take a moment to make a memory last a lifetime, lovely thoughts!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I don't know how you do it, you always find a way to go straight into the depths of my heart. My friend's birthday is the 29th of this month and this made miss that friend more so, than normal. Loved it. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marge,...absolutely beautiful words here. I've read it thrice  I like it so. Take care of you M. *Peace. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- This is so sweet. Made me smile. love ya, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Yep ... and there's a great story behind this one ! James~ Smiling at you ... Karilea~ Yes - Yes ! Etched forever. Kit~ I thank you for such a sweet reply. Yeah, just a moment .... SEA~ I like knowing I target your heart ! I hope you can call your friend. SpitFire~ Awwwww ! Thank you for letting me know. Vicky~ I LOVE spreading smiles ! Love to all .... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Fond memories are the small things that mean so much. A smile, a wink, a pat on the back. I like this September memory much! Deb |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
First off....did you know, yeah you knew. You and Karilea are on the same wave length because when I clicked in here I thought maybe I was revisiting a "shadow" of her's. LOL......just how many poets minds do you delve into my friend?lol. Secondly I love this and those special memories can bring smiles in instants. So are you gonna share the WHOLE story with us or would that be kissing and telling? |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Marge~ You never cease to amaze me. You're my poetic idol  . This made me cry thinking of someone.~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Thanks. Yeah, small things can make for BIG memories. MarkB~ Yep ! Of course I knew ! Does that surprise you ? .... Nah ! She's my favorite shadow ... she knows. AngelSusie~ So GOOD to see you, my first little 'mentee'. Thank you, honey for such a sweet remark. I greatly appreciate you and it's my pleasure to try to live up to your expectations ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i can relate to this..very nice Marge.. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I like these moments as well Marge The way someone can make you smile just in an instant and you them, makes the heart warm and the soul soar. Love ya Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
I too have had moments like this. Wonderful writing, this is! I am many. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, although I posted "mine" after you posted yours...it had been typed up ahead of time...so I let it stay, to show you that yes, our muse flits between us, giving us those fickle tickles...! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. Tracie~ You got it, hon ! Thanks, my friend. Siofra~ Thanks so much and welcome to Passions. Karilea~ We know ... that little flip-flopping muse leaves us both gems. Wonderful to be in tune with you anytime ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh how precious those moments that bring a smile to our hearts....Simply beautiful Marge. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Was cruising and found your sweet reply to this one - I thank you and am pleased as punch to send this one for another round. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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