Open Poetry #10 |
For A Kiss |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
For A Kiss If I could have just one thing, I'd choose a kiss. With a kiss I'd feel the softness of your lips, the warmth of your body, the smoothness of your skin, the gentleness of your soul, the pounding of my heart, the ache in my soul, the love I freely give, just for a kiss. w. james beard, jr. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is wonderful...kisses can be always forever in time, for the young, and the old, the inbetween and bold, and tomorrow's promise of a future that won't hold... yes, this is wonderful... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JWesley~ this is wonderful......I just love a good kiss....... -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Outstanding...and suddenly I find myself thinking of a certain womans lips...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
jwesley, *Kiss Kiss* Wonderful poem. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the ache in my soul, the love I freely give, just for a kiss. ========== a kiss of bliss ... you've penned a gem ... so many emotions expressed in a few soft spoken, well chosen words. perfect JW... take care jm "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" Lao Tze Tao ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
jwesley--A kiss is a silent poem. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sunshine, couldn't agree with you more... Sea, Oh don't we all...seems there's never enough of them or hugs. James, kiss her twice, and more... Kethy, thanks so much... JM, "a kiss of bliss"; aren't they all?? Martie, "silent poems..."; yes, that's why this falls so far short of what I wanted & tried to say. jwesley |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
JW* You made "just a kiss" sound like more than just a kiss...I should pay more attention the next time I'm kissed!!! Great writing~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
JW- you have penned this so beautifully my friend. a kiss is sometimes not just a kiss. the feelings in this were simply breataking. take care. ~amy~ |
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