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jwesley
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0 posted 2000-11-12 04:10 PM





For A Kiss

If I could have just one thing,
I'd choose a kiss.
With a kiss I'd feel the softness
of your lips, the warmth
of your body, the smoothness
of your skin, the gentleness
of your soul, the pounding
of my heart, the ache
in my soul, the love
I freely give,
just for a kiss.



w. james beard, jr.



© Copyright 2000 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-11-12 05:15 PM


This is wonderful...kisses can be always forever in time, for the young, and the old, the inbetween and bold, and tomorrow's promise of a future that won't hold...

yes, this is wonderful...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



SEA
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2 posted 2000-11-12 06:11 PM


JWesley~ this is wonderful......I just love a good kiss....... -SEA
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-11-12 09:42 PM


Outstanding...and suddenly I find myself thinking of a certain womans lips...James
Kethry
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4 posted 2000-11-13 03:19 PM


jwesley,
*Kiss Kiss* Wonderful poem.
Write on
Kethry


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Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-11-13 04:01 PM


the ache
in my soul, the love
I freely give,
just for a kiss.
==========
a kiss of bliss ...
you've penned a gem ...
so many emotions expressed in a few soft spoken, well chosen words.
perfect JW...
take care
jm


"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
Lao Tze Tao

~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Martie
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6 posted 2000-11-13 04:19 PM


jwesley--A kiss is a silent poem.
jwesley
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7 posted 2000-11-13 08:10 PM


Sunshine, couldn't agree with you more...

Sea, Oh don't we all...seems there's never enough of them or hugs.

James, kiss her twice, and more...

Kethy, thanks so much...

JM, "a kiss of bliss"; aren't they all??

Martie, "silent poems..."; yes, that's why this falls so far short of what I wanted & tried to say.

jwesley

Butterflies_dont_cry
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8 posted 2000-11-13 08:14 PM


JW* You made "just a kiss" sound like more
than just a kiss...I should pay more
attention the next time I'm kissed!!! Great
writing~

Aimster
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9 posted 2000-11-13 09:02 PM


JW-
you have penned this so beautifully
my friend. a kiss is sometimes not just
a kiss. the feelings in this were simply
breataking. take care.
~amy~

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