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My Truth |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
So quietly you sit cuddled on my lap casting dreams upon the lake Soft giggles as the wind teases through our hair and the sun paints yours every shade of gold A gentle kiss placed carefully upon my cheek Tiny fingers resting on my arm and within the space of silence you give me back my truth To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
This one is soft, gentle, soothing and peaceful, all wrapped within a comforting beauty. Alicat |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh my! This was so touching it brought tears to my eyes! Lovely, lovely poem.  |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
This is precious in both image and sentiment. I cannot pull out my favorite line, as I love them all. Very, very nicely written, and I thank you ~ Rainydays |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Dream, I adore this one it's just a loveable write no other words I can find... Enjoyed the read  Coco |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Oh this gently beautiful! What a nice change of pace! Love it!! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Need to think up new superlatives for something that breathes so magnificently across my being. This is a place I've been, if only here and in my dreams. Welcome to Passions - I'll be watching you!  Christopher |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
This is just so lovely and beautiful! Welcome to Passions. I look forward to reading more of your work. Take care. ~amy~ |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Thank you so much everyone for the wonderful welcome and kind words. I really look forward to reading more from everyone. What a wonderful group! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You paint a tender moment with perfect ease, then allow me to see it...thank you. |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
dreamkeeper, I REALLY liked this! Tender, and simple, but also a touch of profundity (which is also somehow sweet, honest). A delightful read... ~ Beth |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a most lovely scene..serene..truth.. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I'm spceehless for once Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
One doesn't have to speak, action speaks louder than words. This is beautiful |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
In the simplest scene you've createst the greatest expression of love. just wonderful. I applaud you. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is beautiful, dreamkeeper, makes me think of a Cassatt painting (hope I didn't misspell that - brain cramp). Thanks for sharing it.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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