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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Airborne Bound for home, I close my eyes - your face etched on the back of my lids, like imprint of rooftop in a birder's pigeon - your touch as deep as glacier tracks - your fragrance as fresh as a baby's first laugh - your whisper as full of meaning as the words your eyes impart. © RAM 8/31/00 |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Hi RAM...Your poem stirs my senses and the descriptions are vivid! Love it...  ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Wow, I could feel the love, someone is very very lucky! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ram~ Good to see you ... Well ... I must tell you ... I like this ! ! 'your fragrance as fresh as a baby's first laugh - your whisper as full of meaning as the words your eyes impart.' Better turn that plane around ... Oh ? You did ? Way to go ! Softly smiling~ .... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
excellent writing! really very fine verse. I'll look for more of your work. i don't believe i've read you until tonight. this sings  |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Thank you chanson, inot2B, Marge and Doreen |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
like imprint of rooftop in a birder's pigeon - your touch as deep as glacier tracks - you're the master of imagery, my dear one. Love, Corinne |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Thank you, sweet poet Core. But, you see, I have such a wonderful muse inspiring me. Love, Rick |
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