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AngelEyes Junior Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 14Wisconsin, US |
Taunting me with the lies you told Reflections of vengeance my eyes behold As I read the words you spoke in the past Words from a mold you previously cast "I love you" was all you needed to say Stalking my heart like I was your prey Deception foreshadows plans justified Reality is you just plain lied Friends to the end we did proclaim Thoughts of you will not be the same Feelings of hatred weigh on my mind Memories of betrayal are all I find Together was never further apart Looking inside, searching my heart Finding a way to see thru the lies No care anymore for "how's?" and "why's?" Truth will prevail as I discover Your self-proclaimed love for another Is merely a way to heal the pain I realize now I loved you the same |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Wow this is a great poem, welcome to Passions. I give you fair warning this site is full of the kindest most giving people in the whole world. You have loads of talent and it's so nice to have you here. Take care Marsha  |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
First off, welcome to passoins. Secondly, nice work, lots of feeling. Hope to see more of you in the future. Keith Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Hello AngelEyes, Add my welcome to the pot  Will be reading more of you I hope! ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to Passions!!!! This piece is filled with much emotion and reads very well. Think we are gonna like having you here. |
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AngelEyes Junior Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 14Wisconsin, US |
Thank you to all of you for such a warm welcome! Slowly but surely I will get the hang of this . lol I look forward to reading all of your poetry and feel right at home already |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Welcome! I can't wait to read more! This is superb! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
the thing that stood out for me in this poem was the title... to juxtapose "truth" and "lies" was a superb use of language the poem says so much about the author... in that i think it is sincerely written from the heart.... and that is a quality i very much admire in poetry glad to have you with us AngelEyes... and i pray you soar!!! ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
angeleyes, Welcome to passions.Great first post here, hope to see more. Just a quick warning about a scallywag named Long John Ag. He'll try all manner of flattery to get your poetic secrets from you. Shhhh don't tell him anything  Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
What a well written poem. You use the language very well. Welcome. I am new myself. I am many. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AngelEyes~ Welcome to Passions family of friends and poets. Enjoyed your entrance ... hope to see more. Take time to read and respond to offerings of lots of talented poets found among our circle of friends. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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AngelEyes Junior Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 14Wisconsin, US |
Thank you to all of you. (I will be become more efficient and personal I promise. lol) I appreciate the warm welcome I have received and I am trying to find time to read all of your work, I am astonished at the amount of poetry posted here and look forward to spending my free time here (sometimes I wonder what that is! *g*). Thanks again everyone! To find the depth and meaning of true love you must search deep inside |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Dear Angel Eyes - Welcome to Passions in Poetry. I am the head poet in here, and all the other poets share their innermost poetic secrets with me (so you can too). Do not trust Balladeer or Toerag or any other male (except me of course *self-assured posturing*). They are rascals and scalawags! All of the women are wonderful, and it appears you will fit right in. Do not read Kethry's response. She is out to get me for no reason whatsoever!!! As for your poem... very well written. The lines flow smoothly and the thoughts progress very well from beginning to end. I like the way you ended it, too. I hope it isn't from personal experience. |
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AngelEyes Junior Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 14Wisconsin, US |
As you can see by my poetry I have no secrets. Or any specific style of writing. *eg* To find the depth and meaning of true love you must search deep inside |
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