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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Feeling that I’m alive Although I see my wrinkles Crisp are my eyes Everlasting twinkles Living out my days In servitude of God Free my weathered skin To a body shed of sod |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I was thinking crisp...like Crunch Bars...so I read it again with a new train of thought...oooooh yuh I like it much better with the view from the new train...very cool W.O.W. I like the way you weave!! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
You speak reams in a very few lines, this is excellent work, I like it very much. Regards Olias |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx BDC yuh and if you look again you might see something you missed olias thank yuh fellow poet |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
OOOOOOOOooooooooooooooo Yuh sneaky weaver you!!! I will save my $$ for chocolate and false teeth though  waaaaaaaaay cool you are  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehe BDC |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehe BDC |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Very clever, Walt...enough inspiration in these few words to "lift" even the most unassailable reader, I believe. Thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and fools go where angels fear to tread ... very cool indeed Walt... cool is good when one is feeling crisp ... (and i usually am) later-subliminal-metaphor-gator jm |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Hey you - congrats on your 2000th post ya know... Twinkle forever I'm sure you will, Walt...  Michael |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
rainy janet and michael thank you so much |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Walt, congrats on 2000 and as always an intriguing read. Been a pleasure. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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