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Darling Once More
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Darling Once More |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~Darling Once More~ The music stops the dance is over the flowers on the floor It's a long walk to the door in slow motion, I go longing to run...oh how I wish to fly this dance is unrehearsed Looking back, I remember you my heart remembers to break this dream is hard to take Far away, a space between us now never to join again, the circle broken in bittersweet dreams... I'll think of you BloomingRose |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Longing and lamenting...........but kinda nice..........and soft. Jon |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Very touching, and sad. Somewhere out there is that etearnal dance partner, you just gotta keep looking. Nice work. Keith |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Deb-You have no idea how this one fits for me....or maybe you do after reading all that is going on. This is a lovely piece of poetry but the words say so much to me right now. I am putting this in my library so I can secretly call it mine for a certain butterfly and I. Thank you so much for all you do. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
If only my heart could stop hearing the music. . . Just beautiful Blooming Rose. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just me being selfish and wanting this one to be read more. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ This glides across the page with beautiful thoughts. Enjoyed it very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Bloomingrose~ Wonderful piece of work, very enjoyable to read...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you all for kind words. The dance was unrehearsed, as broken hearts often are. Still, we can all learn a new dance. I for one, have new tap in my toes. Deb |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
No, I, for one, will never be ready or rehearsed for a broken heart. Beautiful and very touching write!! Enjoyed it a lot! sp  |
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